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2021年全国Ⅰ卷读后续写
A Mother’s day surprise
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them indisappointment, their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Who are the characters in the text
The twins Jeff and Jenna.
2. What were they doing
They were making breakfast for their mother as a Mother’s Day surprise.
3. How was everything going
The bread was burnt, the porridge boiled over, and Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner. Everything was in a mess.
1.Opening:
The twins Jeff and Jenna planned to make breakfast for their mother as a Mother’s Day surprise.
2.Build-up:
Everything went well until Jeff burnt the first piece of bread.
3.Climax:
The porridge boiled over, Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and the other piece of bread turned black.
4.Resolution:
Their father appeared …
5.Ending:
The twins carried the breakfast to their mother …
What can we know from the first sentences of the two paragraphs
Para 1 : As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
According to Para. 2, the breakfast must be made in Para. 1; if this was the case, did their father offer any help If yes, how
Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
How might the mother react to the breakfast What might be the ending of the story
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. _______________________________________________________ （“别害怕”爸爸边说边递给他们一人一块湿毛巾，帮他们快速清理干净一切脏乱。非谓语动词作状语）After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. _______________________________________________________ （在爸爸的精心指导下，没过多久法式吐司和鸡粥就做好了。it表示时间的用法）Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” _______________________________________________________（这份惊喜如此美好，妈妈兴奋地摇醒了爸爸，这时候爸爸正假装酣睡呢。so… that… 倒装）Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room._____________________________ （这是多么美妙又甜蜜的惊喜啊！ 感叹句）
尝试补全对话
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare the breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” So sweet was the surprise that Mother excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore. Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. What a beautiful and sweet surprise!
范文赏析
2021年新高考I卷读后续写——逻辑连贯
“Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
重复、指代等
Para1：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
“Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” So sweet was the surprise that Mother excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore. Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. What a beautiful and sweet surprise!
Para2：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
2021年新高考I卷读后续写——精彩语言
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动词短语固定搭配
独立主格结构
固定句式
it作形式主语……
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” So sweet was the surprise that Mother excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore. Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. What a beautiful and sweet surprise!
定语从句
感叹句
so…that,倒装
生动的语言
2021年新高考I卷读后续写——精彩语言
正在忙某事 be up to sth.
打扫干净 clean up
高兴起来 cheer up
溜回去睡觉 sneak back to bed
一看见 at the sight of
与……合作 team up with
（脸）放光彩 light up
亮点语块和句式
范文部分
材料部分
充满兴奋 be filled with excitement
计划做某事 plan to do sth.
轻而易举 There is / was nothing to it
一切进展顺利直到……Everything was going smoothly until …
痛苦地呼喊出来 give a cry of pain
闻到烧焦的味道 catch the smell of burning
补充语料
5
素材积累
1. Without a second thought, Dad offered to help. He joined the twins in preparing the Mother’s Day surprise.
2. The twins assisted their father with the breakfast, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father.
3. He cleaned the kitchen in less than 5 minutes and continued with the unfinished cooking.
4. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen.
5. Then he sneaked back to bed.
6. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
7. They said “Happy Mother’s Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement.
8. Her face lit up with happiness.
9. When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement.
10. Mother bit into a sandwich and exclaimed it was the best sandwich she had ever tasted.

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