2022上海十六区高三英语二模汇编 —作文（答案解析版）

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1.宝山区
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120—150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。你最喜欢哪一种线上购物方式，请介绍一下。
文章必须包括：
1. 简单介绍一种你熟悉的线上购物；
2. 对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。
（注：文中不要出现真实姓名和学校）
【答案】With the help f the Internet, shpping is nt a difficult jb. There are varius ways t shp nline, including grup purchasing, Duyin delivery, and s n, amng which grup purchasing is my favrite.
Grup purchasing is very cnvenient and what is special is that it prvides prducts with lw prices, therefre, it saves peple a lt f mney. Besides, because there are many familiar peple participating in grup purchasing, it can reduce the risk f buying fake prducts.
Recently, I bught a laptp thrugh grup purchasing. The stre shipped quickly and after I received it, the custmer service staff carefully explained t me the perfrmance f the cmputer and hw t maintain and update the system t get the best experience. All in all, it is a very pleasant shpping experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。请介绍一下你最喜欢的一种线上购物方式，并对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：varius→a variety f/varieties f
参加：participate in→take part in/be invlved in
减少： reduce→minimize/lwer
令人愉快的：pleasant→enjyable/entertaining
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, because there are many familiar peple participating in grup purchasing, it can reduce the risk f buying fake prducts.
拓展句：Besides, many familiar peple participate in grup purchasing, reducing the risk f buying fake prducts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are varius ways t shp nline, including grup purchasing, Duyin delivery, and s n, amng which grup purchasing is my favrite.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Grup purchasing is very cnvenient and what is special is that it prvides prducts with lw prices, therefre, it saves peple a lt f mney. （运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
2.崇明区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学的高三学生徐晶，最近，学校拟定了今年高三毕业典礼方案的讨论稿如下，并公布在了校园网，征求师生意见。你看到后很想发表你的意见，写一封邮件给负责的王老师，内容须包括：
你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；
你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
【答案】Dear Mr. /Ms. Wang,
My name is Xu Jing. I am a senir 3 student frm Zhnghua Middle Schl. Seeing the discussin draft f this year’s senir three graduatin ceremny, I am very glad t give yu sme f my pinins.
First f all, I think the graduatin ceremny shuld be held in June after ur cllege entrance examinatin. At this time, ur high schl studies have just finished and we are relatively relaxed. In additin, the graduatin ceremny shuld be held in the playgrund, where we can see the blue sky and white cluds, and feel clser t nature. Mst imprtantly, the participants shuld include sme parents’ representatives, s that ur graduatin ceremny will be full f family affectin.
Hpe my pinins can be f great help t yu.
Yurs,
Xu Jing
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，对学校拟定的今年高三毕业典礼方案的讨论稿提出自己的意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：idea→pinin
结束：end→finish
此外：besides→in additin
希望：wish→hpe
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am a senir 3 student frm Zhnghua Middle Schl.
拓展句：I am a senir 3 student wh is frm Zhnghua Middle Schl.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Seeing the discussin draft f this year’s senir three graduatin ceremny, I am very happy t give yu sme f my pinins. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】In additin, the graduatin ceremny shuld be held in the playgrund, where we can see the blue sky and white cluds, and feel clser t nature. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
3.奉贤区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad t hear that ur schl is ging t set up Anxiety Relieving Club t help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and utging by, I am eager t becme a member f it.
At the beginning f high schl, I was under great pressure. Thanks t the help f teachers and classmates, I came ut f the haze, s I have the experience f helping ther students reduce pressure. I have fund that many students under great pressure are shy and dn’t like t cmmunicate with thers, s I think helping them becme active is the key. It’s a gd chice t let them jin study grups and sprts activities.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my suggestins int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
创立：set up→establish
害羞的：shy→self-cnscius
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the beginning f high schl, I was under great pressure.
拓展句：At the beginning f high schl, I was under great pressure, which made me sad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad t hear that ur schl is ging t set up Anxiety Relieving Club t help students relieve stress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I have fund that many students under great pressure are shy and dn’t like t cmmunicate with thers, s I think helping them becme active is the key.(运用了that引导的宾语从句
4.虹口区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120 -150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。某英语杂志最近发起了一个高中生英语征文活动，其主题与内容见下表。要求参加征文活动者除了写出规定的内容外，还须补充至少两点内容，并进行进一步的阐述。请按要求写一篇作文，参加这个征文活动。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
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【答案】The pwer f smile
Smile is imprtant in ur life. Smile can help relieve yur stress, making yu relaxed and stress-free. When I was in senir three, I ften felt great pressure. Then my teacher recmmended that I shuld face everything in life with a smile. I learned t smile t everything, gd r bad, and then I felt a sense f relief as I freed myself frm the stress that cmes frm study. Smile is cntagius. A smiling face will always be greeted with smiling faces. Smile has a magic pwer, bringing happiness t peple arund yu. When yu smile, yu appear kind and attractive. Smile will bring yu gd luck. Peple always say the ne wh likes smiling will never lack luck. Smile can help us succeed. Nbdy will refuse t cperate with smene with a smiling face. Nbdy is unwilling t help yu when yu smile t everyne. Therefre, success will always be accmpanied by a smiling face.
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生根据表格中提示的内容给某英语杂志写一篇题目为“The pwer f smile”的征文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：recmmend→suggest
好运：gd luck→gd frtune
合作：cperate with→jin hands with
拒绝：refuse→reject
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Smile can help relieve yur stress, making yu relaxed and stress-free.
拓展句： Smile can help relieve yur stress, which makes yu relaxed and stress-free.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Peple always say the ne wh likes smiling will never lack luck. （运用了wh引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 Nbdy is unwilling t help yu when yu smile t everyne. （运用了双重否定表示肯定和when引导的时间状语从句。）
5黄埔区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生李明。临近毕业，你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创产品义卖活动，已在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包含：
1.提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议；
2.给出你的理由。
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【答案】Dear Students’Unin
My name is Li Ming, a student f ur Qiming Middle Schl. I’m mre than happy t give yu sme advice n the Campus cultural and creative prducts charity sale.
First, I think the time f the charity sale shuld be between 5:00 and 6:00 n Mnday, n July 11, 2022, when we will be free. Besides, the place f the charity sale shuld be in each clas, where we will nt be expsed t the sun. What’s the mst imprtant is that we can sell anything as lng as they are cultural and creative.
Hpe my suggestins can be f great help t yu.
Yurs
Li Ming
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写一封邮件就将组织的一次校园文创产品义卖活动提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
十分：mre than→very
建议：advice→suggestins
只要：as lng as→s lng as
有空：be free→have free time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Ming, a student f ur Qiming Middle Schl.
拓展句：My name is Li Ming, wh is a student f ur Qiming Middle Schl.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, the place f the charity sale shuld be in each class, where we will nt be expsed t the sun.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】What’s the mst imprtant is that we can sell anything as lng as they are cultural and creative .(运用了what 引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
6.嘉定区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在征集学生对于“网红景点”（Instagram places）的看法，你对此很有兴趣，决定投稿，内容须包括：
1. 你对“网红景点”的态度；
2. 结合你的亲身经历说明理由。
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【答案】 I am cncerned abut the phenmenn when the term “Instagram place” was cined t describe thse scenic spts in China, which have gne viral nline vernight due t the influence f thse ppular pht-sharing apps. Objectively speaking, being an Instagram place is a duble-edged swrd, and its negatives utweigh its psitives.
Take my trip as an example. Last Sunday, my classmates and I went t ur lcal Instagram place, a wetland park. The shuttle buses vercrwded, the aggressive and chked traffic disappinted us. Wrse still, hardly had we fllwed the endless stream f peple int the park when we became shcked at the rubbish everywhere, uncllected. What we experienced changed ur perceptin f the park. Hw I miss that quiet, clean park where I used t kill time by reading my nvel peacefully!
In the face f a fld f turists, thse “Instagram places” make an immediate prfit, but they tend t cnfrnt awkward prblems, such as traffic cngestin, a messy envirnment, and turists’ pr experience, which, in turn, will have an adverse effect n the “Instagram places” themselves.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对网红景点发表观点，并结合亲身经历说明其中理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心的：cncerned → wrried
由于：due t → n accunt f
令人尴尬的：awkward → embarrassing
改变：change→ alter
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Wrse still, hardly had we fllwed the endless stream f peple int the park when we became shcked at the rubbish everywhere, uncllected.
拓展句：Even wrse，immediately we fllwed the endless stream f peple int the park, we became shcked at the rubbish everywhere, uncllected.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am cncerned abut the phenmenn when the term “Instagram place” was cined t describe thse scenic spts in China, which have gne viral nline vernight due t the influence f thse ppular pht-sharing apps.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，动词不定式作目的状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Wrse still, hardly had we fllwed the endless stream f peple int the park when we became shcked at the rubbish everywhere, uncllected. （运用了倒装句）
8.金山区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120—150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
青年强则国强，榜样的力量是无穷的。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“My rle mdel”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇文章，内容须包括：
1）你心目中的青年榜样是谁？他（她）有怎样的优良品质？
2）用一个具体事例说明他（她）的品质。
3）他（她）给你的学习或生活带来了怎样的影响？
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【答案】When cmes t rle mdel, peple always think abut sme pp stars r heres, but my rle mdel is my cusin.
My cusin is a simple math teacher. When I was a child, I always thught t be weak because I’m thin and weak in sprts and math. Nt nly my teachers and classmates, but als my mther always scld that hw stupid I was. But cusin didn’t think s. Instead f sclded, she always encuraged me that “dn’t give up, just try again”. Besides, she als helped me with math. Because f her patient and gd teaching, I fund math was s interesting and became gd at it day by day. Because f her encuragement, I vercme lts f difficulties and find back my cnfidence. What’s mre, I became t knw that very ften a disappintment sme times can becmes a turning pint fr a wnderful experience.
Nw I want t express t cusin that hw grateful I am, and her wrds “dn’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于“My rle mdel”的征文活动，写一篇参赛文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
愚蠢的：stupid→ flish
此外：besides → what’s mre
感激的：grateful→ thankful
由于：because f→ due t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nw I want t express t cusin that hw grateful I am, and her wrds “dn’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
拓展句：Nw I want t express t cusin that hw grateful I am, whse wrds “dn’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nt nly my teachers and classmates, but als my mther always scld that hw stupid I was.（运用了nt nly…but als..连接的固定句型）
【高分句型2】When I was a child, I always thught t be weak because I'm thin and weak in sprts and math.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句
9.静安区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:
请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）
【答案】A survey cnducted by a website is aimed at figuring ut the situatin abut high schl students’ use f shrt vides as a channel fr gaining infrmatin. As is clearly shwn in the table, abut 48% f their ttal screen time has been spent n cntents that are f benefit t their study while time distributed t vides related t entertainment and leisure accunts fr 31%.In additin, 12% f their time is taken up by watching vides cncerning sme imprtant life skills. And 9% is spent n randm cntents.
As far as I am cncerned, it is the advances f the Internet that make it accessible fr students t help with their study, relieve themselves f stress and imprve their knwledge f life skills thrugh shrt vides. Thus, it is n wnder that a large prprtin f their time is spent n shrt vides. I am sure that this trend will cntinue and last frever.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在：be aimed at→ be intended t d
与……相关：related t→ with regard t
除此以外：in additin→ additinally
提高：imprve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In additin, 12% f their time is taken up by watching vides cncerning sme imprtant life skills.
拓展句：In additin 12% f their time is taken up by watching vides that are relevant t sme imprtant life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is clearly shwn in the table, abut 48% f their ttal screen time has been spent n cntents that are f benefit t their study while time distributed t vides related t entertainment and leisure accunts fr 31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As far as I am cncerned, it is the advances f the Internet that make it accessible fr students t help with their study, relieve themselves f stress and imprve their knwledge f life skills thrugh shrt vides.（运用了强调句型以及make it+形容词+fr sb. t d sth.的结构
10.闵行区
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设今年暑假你们学校学生会组织部分学生开展支援边远地区一所学校的志愿者活动，正在招募志愿者。现有两个活动方案：一是暑期自费去当地一所学校开展教学工作；二是在暑期开展募捐，购买几台电脑和一些书籍寄往该学校。你有意向参加志愿者活动。
请你写一封信给学生会，信中包括：1、简要介绍你自己；
2、你报名参加哪一个项目；
3、简要说明你选择这个项目的理由。
【答案】Dear Students Unin,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-ld student in N.6 High Schl. Hearing that ur schl will rganize sme students t hld vlunteer activities aiming t supprt a schl in the remte area, I’m writing t apply t be a vluntary teacher and teach at the lcal schl in this summer vacatin. And the reasns why I chse it are as fllws.
I lve teaching and I’ve been dreaming t be an English teacher since I was yung. S I will put great enthusiasm int teaching at this lcal schl. Additinally, I have prficiency in bth written and spken English which yu can tell frm my academic perfrmance, and thus I’m qualified t ffer prfessinal guidance t students there.
I d hpe that yu can cnsider my applicatin s that I can make sme cntributin t the vluntary cause f ur schl and this remte schl.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是一篇应用文，学生会正在招募志愿者，开展支援边远地区学校的志愿者活动，写一封申请信，表明自己申报志愿者的具体内容和原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办：hld→carry ut
支援：supprt→assist
投入：put int→ devte t
考虑：cnsider→take……int cnsideratin
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t apply t be a vluntary teacher and teach at the lcal schl in this summer vacatin.
拓展句：I’m writing t apply t be a vluntary teacher, wh can teach at the lcal schl in this summer vacatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that ur schl will rganize sme students t hld vlunteer activities aiming t supprt a schl in the remte area, I’m writing t apply t be a vluntary teacher and teach at the lcal schl in this summer vacatin. (运用了非谓语现在分词结构)
[高分句型2] Additinally, I have prficiency in bth written and spken English which yu can tell frm my academic perfrmance, and thus I’m qualified t ffer prfessinal guidance t students there.(运用了定语从句
11.浦东新区
假如你是李明，你的班级将举行一节班会课，主题为“我喜欢的一句话”。请从下面两句中选择一句撰写发言稿，内容需包括：
1. 你对这句话的理解；
2. 你喜欢这句话的理由（结合生活实例）。
·There is a crack in everything. That’s hw the light gets in.
——Lenard Nrman Chen莱昂纳德•科恩（加拿大歌手、诗人）
·Knwing is nt enugh; we must apply. Willing is nt enugh; we must d.
——Jhann Wlfgan vn Gethe歌德（德国作家、诗人）
【答案】Dear classmates,
Tday I’d like t share my favrite sentence with yu. It is “There is a crack in everything. That’s hw the light gets in.”
This sentence means smething bad may make gd things happen. I still remember the day when I was left alne at hme. I carelessly brke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back, I was s fearful that I didn’t tell him the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nthing, but I culd read his distrust. The next mrning, after a restless night, I admitted t my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled t me. Frm then n, I never tld lies. My hnesty wn me great trust frm thers, which benefited my grwth a lt.
The accident r exactly the “crack” frced me t mind my behavir. It is the “crack” that is reminding me all the time that I have a lng way t g. With the light thrugh the crack can see the rad ahead clearly.
Thank yu!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生从下面两句中选择一句撰写发言稿，内容需包括：1. 你对这句话的理解；2. 你喜欢这句话的理由（结合生活实例）。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发生：happen→ccur
珍爱：treasure→cherish
害怕的：fearful→afraid
迫使：frce→blige
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Tday I’d like t share my favrite sentence with yu. It is “There is a crack in everything. That’s hw the light gets in.”
拓展句：Tday I’d like t share my favrite sentence with yu, which is “There is a crack in everything. That’s hw the light gets in.”
【点睛】[高分句型1] I still remember the day when I was left alne at hme. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I carelessly brke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.青浦区
假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，应邀在与海外友好学校的“云班会（virtual class meeting）”上就“居家生活/学习新技能”的话题做交流，你的发言必须包括：
 简要介绍你学会的一项有关生活或学习的新技能；
 学会这一项技能给你带来的变化。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
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【答案】Hell, everyne!
I’m Li Qing, a senir 3 student studying in Purun Middle schl. It’s my great hnr t be invited t attend this virtual class meeting and t share with yu what kind f life skill I have learned when staying at hme due t the pandemic.
In fact, the new skill is that I have learned t ck delicius beef ndles. Since it was my first time t ck smething, I had met several difficulties such as hw t slice beef and when t put the ingredients t make tasty beef ndles. Frtunately, with my repeated attempts, my hard wrk eventually paid ff. A bwl f delicate beef ndles giving ff pleasant scent was made. It was at that time that I realized that nthing culd be dne withut a willing heart. And it has als taught me t be patient with what I d until success cmes.
That’s all. Thank yu fr yur listening.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，应邀在与海外友好学校的“云班会（virtual class meeting）”上就“居家生活/学习新技能”的话题做交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：hnr→privilege
遇到：meet→encunter
意识到：realize→be aware f
事实上：in fact→as a matter f fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A bwl f delicate beef ndles giving ff pleasant scent was made.
拓展句：A bwl f delicate beef ndles which gave ff pleasant scent was made.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s my great hnr t be invited t attend this virtual class meeting and t share with yu what kind f life skill I have learned when staying at hme due t the pandemic.(运用了it作形式主语，what引导的宾语从句和when 引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】It was at that time that I realized that nthing culd be dne withut a willing heart.(运用了强调句句型)
13.松江区
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你校学生会将代表全体高三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。你须在邮件中：
1）推荐一份你认为合适的礼物；
2）说明你推荐该礼物的原因。
【答案】Dear Students’ Unin,
Knwing that yu intend t give sme presents t all teachers f Senir 3 n behalf us at the graduatin ceremny, I’m writing with utmst pleasure t ffer my recmmendatin t yu.
What I strngly recmmend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated. As we all knw, teachers need t talk a lt in class, s there is n dubt that drinking ht water is gd fr their thrat. What’s mre, if a name r a sentence can be inscribed n the cup t shw ur sincerity, it will be better.
I sincerely hpe that yu take my recmmendatin int accunt. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写信推荐一份礼物给高三年级的每一位老师。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚：sincerity→genuineness
此外：what’s mre →besides
对……有益：be gd fr→d gd t
表示：shw→ present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knwing that yu intend t give sme presents t all teachers f Senir 3 n behalf us at the graduatin ceremny, I’m writing with utmst pleasure t ffer my recmmendatin t yu.
拓展句：Because I knw yu intend t give sme presents t all teachers f Senir 3 n behalf us at the graduatin ceremny, I’m writing with utmst pleasure t ffer my recmmendatin t yu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What I strngly recmmend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】As we all knw, teachers need t talk a lt in class, s there is n dubt that drinking ht water is gd fr their thrat.(运用了there is n dubt that…的固定句型)
14.徐汇区
假设你是明启中学学生王磊，长期以来，一直是个科幻小说迷，甚至还自己写过一些短篇科幻小说。 然而，最近你忽然决定不再看科幻小说了，写了一封信告诉你的好朋友李明，告诉他你的这一段经历，信的内容包括：
1．是什么导致你做出这个决定；
2．你做了哪些事来替代科幻小说；
3．这一段经历给你的启示。
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【答案】Dear Li Ming,
I am Wang Lei. I have been a fan f science fictin fr a lng time. I even wrte sme shrt science fictin stries myself. Recently I decided nt t read science fictin any mre. I am writing t tell yu abut my experience.
Yu knw I was addicted t science fictin befre. After entering senir three, I fund my study was tight and my exam results were nt ideal, s I make up my mind t devte myself t studying. I try my best t cultivate my hbbies. Fr instance, I play badmintn t relieve my stress, and jin clubs t gradually quit nvels. Reading nvels is especially cnsuming because peple are engrssed in the nvel. After reading, we will be particularly tired. Mrever, my life was extremely irregular, which seriusly affected my health and life. This experience made me understand the truth f balancing study and entertainment.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友李明写信告诉他自己不看科幻小说的这一段经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决心做： decided t d→am determined t d
上瘾：be addicted t → be bsessed with/ be hked n
投身于：devte myself t→apply neself t
全神贯注于：be engrssed in→ cncentrate n/be absrbed in
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：After entering senir three, I fund my study was tight and my exam results were nt ideal
拓展句：It was after entering senir three that I fund my study was tight and my exam results were nt ideal.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yu knw I was addicted t science fictin befre（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Mrever, my life was extremely irregular, which seriusly affected my health and life. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）中华中学2022届高三毕业典礼方案（讨论稿）
时间：2022年7月25日（星期一）
地点：学校小礼堂
参与对象：全体高三教师与学生、学校校级领导
典礼内容：高三教师代表发言、高三学生代表发言、颁发毕业证书
英语征文活动
主题
the pwer f a smile
内容
微笑有助于缓解压力，提高学习效率；微笑是有感染力的（cntagius），可以影响身边的人。
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地点：学校操场
拟售文创产品：明信片、帽子、书签、笔记本等
获取短视频内容的类型
受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）
辅助学习类
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31%
生活技能类
12%
其他
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15.杨浦区
假设你是明启中学张华，你收到好友王磊的邮件，邀请你在暑假期间一起参与志愿者活动。邮件中含有关于志愿者岗位的相关信息(见下表)。写一封回信，告诉他你的选择及理由。
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【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
I’m happy t receive yur email. Thanks fr yur recmmendatin and invitatin. I already made my chice.
I think the animal care center fits me well, because I’m an abslute pet lver. I always want t have my wn pet, but unfrtunately my parents dn’t allw it. S, this is a precius pprtunity fr me t enjy living with pets. I can feed, bath, walk dgs and cats as well as d the cleaning fr them and I’m sure I can cmplete these tasks much better than thers. Als, I’m available frm 6 p.m. t 7 p.m. at weekdays.
Hw abut yu? What is yur pick? Please let me knw and I can’t wait t see my cute kitties and dggies.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于普通书信。好友王磊邀请在暑假期间一起参与志愿者活动，要求考生给他回信，告诉他自己的选择及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
收到：receive → get
选择：chice → pick
不幸地：unfrtunately → unluckily
机会：pprtunity → chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：S, this is a precius pprtunity fr me t enjy living with pets.
拓展句：S, this is a precius pprtunity fr me where I can enjy living with pets.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think the animal care center fits me well, because I’m an abslute pet lver. (运用了省略连接词的宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] I can feed, bath, walk dgs and cats as well as d the cleaning fr them and I’m sure I can cmplete these tasks much better than thers.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句)
16.长宁区
假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Clumn”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1）你的建议
2）你的理由
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【答案】Dear editr:
I'm WangLei, a senir 3 student f Mingqi middle schl. Recently, I saw a message in the advice clumn f the schl English newspaper and it asked students fr suggestins n imprving the effectiveness f nline learning. I’m writing t give my advice.
First f all, yu shuld find a quiet rm and put yur phne utside the rm. The reasn is that yu shuld cncentrate all yur attentin n the study and make sure yu are nt disturbed during yur study. What’s mre, yu shuld cmmunicate with teachers and students actively in the discussin bards. By ding this, yu can nt nly share yur thughts and experiences but als remember the knwledge well.
I hpe my suggestins useful. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
WangLei
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建议，并且给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→advice
集中精力：cncentrate n→fcus n
此外：what's mre→besides
交流：cmmunicate→exchange
2.句式拓展
并列句变成复合句
原句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice clumn f the schl English newspaper and it asked students fr suggestins n imprving the effectiveness f nline learning.
拓展句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice clumn f the schl English newspaper, which asked students fr suggestins n imprving the effectiveness f nline learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reasn is that yu shuld cncentrate all yur attentin n the study and make sure yu are nt disturbed during yur study.(that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】By ding this, yu can nt nly share yur thughts and experiences but als remember the knwledge well.(nt nly…but als…引导的并列句）
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